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lucky7katt	Attempted Murder	Lead	[-]
Posts: 1 (03/24/03 18:33:30) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Tags : None Attempted Murder Something bothered me I just can't get enough sleep at night I wished it could go away; the nightmare still haunts me to this day I hoped the girl has no recollection of the evil thing I did I had a feeling that she is itching to remember I don't think she would regain her memory All is lost I believed The horror is still with me I can't shake off the bad memories The attempted murder can't be erase from my mind I tried to forget the gruesome deed It tends to crawl back into my mind I could no longer to keep it a secret I prayed this letter would free the guilt from my mind and soul Then I could go on with my life Nobody could stop me from the freedom I have Kazz Falcon Copyright 2003KazzFalcon
Sabresun	Re: Attempted Murder	#1	[-]
poet's pen Posts: 9245 (03/26/03 17:02:44) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	The "I"'s did it.... (they do dominate the piece)
Nageea	Re: Attempted Murder	#2	[-]
moonstone pen Posts: 406 (03/26/03 21:22:44) moonstone pen Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	I don't quite get the connection - the title is about the attempt, the poem is about trying to forget it ever happened. What have I missed?? But it was really good, and understandable too, if I ignored the title.
aeranthes	Re: Attempted Murder	#3	[-]
Posts: 361 (03/29/03 09:06:38) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	An interesting poem - the conscience of an almost murderer. There would be hope for this one I think as he has a conscience not like so many of the serial killer type who never feel anything.

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